Hello there! Nice to hear that you decided to put some of your tunes down
Really like it as a tune, it gets me in a mood :wink2:
Here are my personal thoughts on the track and what I would have done differently, hope it helps:
Vocals: They sound nice and fitting for this genre, although I would use less reverb as it makes them sound a little "off" in some points.
Guitars: They are a little muddy, and could get a little volume boost. They sound well played though so try cutting some low-mids to clear the muddiness. Also, double tracking makes a massive difference in guitars so it would be nice to record them twice and pan them hard left and right, you'll get a more powerful sound and leave space in the mid for the vocal.
Drums: They sound programmed. Not always a bad thing but I thing that something more organic would go well with the track. A little tweaking with the velocities and room mics will make a huge difference.
Nice work overall listened to it several times, hope to hear more from you guys
All the best.