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I disagree. That is all.

Unfortunately there are no episodes until February next year, so you have seen as much as everyone else on this thread. On a side note: Episode Six was hella good.

I am: Wicked Sick.

Because you will look like a total fanny. Remember when you thought Power Rangers was wicked sick when you were 10? And you pretended to be them and flip out and stuff? Well imagine that...but being dressed as a Power Ranger for the rest of your life.

Hey, I'm not one to say what not and what to do. Infact, yes I am. Do not get a cross on your arm. Wait until you are a legal age to get a tattoo.

An old granny steeled my bike.

To be fair, he was the one telling us what he did. We weren't being "nosey". If we all said "oh my god thas sooo cooool" when people say they did something, life on here would be infinitely more boring.

So if you hit something...it will be fine? Doing endos in a car is in no way controlled.

Right so everyone who has been in a car crash is immediately retarded. Have you ever driven a car on the roads before? As for my "irrelevant events", it's a hypothetical example.

So, If we were to adhere to your opinion, lets say someone came on here and said, "hey, I went joyriding yesterday, it was wicked.", and we said, "You are a twat.", we need to calm down? Hell, people get murdered and it doesn't affect me. But that doesn't mean I like murderers. To be honest, it's just annoying, I know I would be pissed off if an uninsured driver messed up something of mine. You need to consider things before you do them, not just because "it is a laugh".

Very cogent. Care to impress us more with some of your fantastic, well thought out arguments?

It's not that it is a health hazard (even though it technically is). But you are uninsured - meaning that if you hit something you will have to pay or people will have to claim. It's quite annoying. People drive with insurance, a driving licence and road tax for a reason you know, not just to spend money.

Mine... I don't even know. It does stuff though, which I guess is cool. Always had it as this.

My ignore list has noone on it. Only because I like reading what stupid people are capable of thinking and doing.

Fantastic. *pats*

Pffft, double bass has been far too overused in recent music in my opinion. For a completely useless video of fast double bass click the link. 1406 beats in 60 seconds. Crap double bass skillz.

Here is your coat.

Wear gloves, and maybe eye protection if you are feeling stupid. Don't drink it. Don't put it in your eyes. Don't ingest it. Don't rub it into cuts. Don't be a retard. Those are my top 5 tips on how to win with Nitromors.

In all fairness, all the designs are bollocks.

CRACK IS CRACKTASTIC.

Ah, a great loss to the musical community. ...

I think as a storyline it is quite cheesy but that's not a problem, just my opinion. In terms of writing style I think you need to tone down the descriptions, they help flesh out the action, but as the story continues it begins to feel overabundant and takes away from them as a whole. Perhaps try to tone them down - this would mean that when they are used they become alot more striking. In terms of errors, ". And it stopped." shouldn't really be a sentence. But that's all I could find on my read-through. The pace of the story seems to be linear, this is just personal preference, but I like quick and abrupt changes of pace and tension, it makes it much more of a "rollercoaster ride", if I were to describe it shockingly badly. Also, as a final note, I find the name Alan hilarious, it's just so boring (no offense all the Alan's out there). I always find if trying to write a passage where you want a particular feeling portrayed, listen to a piece of music which makes you feel like this, then start writing, it will make your passages much more self contained and add to the story as a whole by having the feeling of each passage being there for a reason, some part's seem to trail off and not have an encompassing theme. Anyway, that's all the criticism I could think of, I think you have done a pretty good job, keep working on it. EDIT: - Short Story Here is a short story a friend of mine wrote, I think it's pretty good, quite different, but maybe it could spark some ideas or something.

Yep, seen Pedrosa a couple of times. I ride there aswell. I also saw you in Halfords today.

Yes, arguably one of the most addicting games ever. Just past the 1100 hour mark in played time. I need to go outside.

Transformers : The Movie. That is all. Best. Film. Ever.