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kmissar2007

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its shit

look at most websites and how they are layed out most us bevels and different shades of primay colours but still contrasting , also make sure you use non sariff font so its easier to read etc

fill up the paages moree and make a better nav bar maybe bigger and bold writing so its easier to navigate , your font should be more like the google font with non sariff font like all websites usually use because its visually easy on the eye . the bike parts page is just a silly google picture maybe try and explain what each part does and how parts can vary .

bike types should not have two subtitle links you can cover bike types all in one because theres no need for "mountainbikes" and "racebikes" you can cover it all with the title " Bike types " .use wiki to get all the types of bikes and not forget TRIALS etc lol ,your pictures also obstruct some of the font and are not really very good pictures and are too small. as for the race bike bit , remember fixie bikes ( olympics etc) name professional riders

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research pros so if the audience want they can further research there favv. And a free game really ??? if this website is aimed at 7 year olds maybe but it sounds from the text your audience is aimed at adults or teens wanting to get into the sport :) the wallpapers are not working for me but atleast explain each picture and what the page is for because you might have some div go on it thinking its for his bedroom ... the warnings page is non excistant so you will probably need to cover the dangers of each type of biking as well as legal rights eg ( jumping red lights lol ) reflectors , lights etc etc . the about page is well a little boring maybe write more about the website and yourself and you could put a pic of you riding to break up the text , google adds make it look abit tacky but you can try advertising bicycle websites and acctually put a reference page and links to purchaseing a bike ... Also get a master page (draw one up on paper) CONSISTANTANCY!

sorry if i moaned abit ha but im 15 ;D

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ohh yehh i forgot , look at all of the major bike companies websites from google etc and see how they set it out because lets say the Inspired. website above , thats is what modern websites of today look like , and your website looks like its from 2002 no offense but you have had a great try , well done for the comitment , also break up your text into chunks so its more athstechically ( sorry for spelling ) pleaseing to the eye :) keep it nice and smooth with fill effects so it doesnt look so sharp to the eye and maybe move the racing biker on the top left into the middle of the two word title :D

sorry for the rant im bored any questions im happy to help good luck ...

Josh

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