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Personally, I don't really like it. No offence mate, but you can do much better. It's too bland for my taste and I'd have to have a good think to find a part of it that I could say 'Yeah, he worked hard on that bit'.

Also, did you (pardon the pun) 'stroke' the girl? I can't figure out if that's why there are loads of big white dots to 'our left' of her.

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i like the overall design and layout but the colours are too bland.

I like the choice of colour, kinda washed out almost which is all cool, but it just need a bit more variation, maybe a couple more tones or something?

I like it, but its not interesting enough, just doesn't catch the eye, other than the picture.

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Personally I like it, but I'm not sure of the font... Seems a bit like an afterthought... (Sorry if this sounds insulting (Y) )

I think a sans serif font with cleaner simple lines and a light weighting would fit really well with your design - such as Identikal Sans (if you'e got the money)

You could always go for comic sans... (Y)" (Y)

EDIT: The more I think about it, I reckon you could use the redesigned London Underground font (Can't remember the name) that was in Creative Review a while back if you could find it in a lighter weight...

That abstract influence site is amazing!! Gonna join up soon... :sick:

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