Guy, one doesn't understand what you are asking. If you want tips on English then you need to start a sentence with a capital letter and end with a full stop. Use I instead of i when speaking in the first person and don't garnish you sentence structure with numbers to get you point across (2 get your point across). Probably is spelt as and not proberly. Please review with spelling corrections, however you must consider the use of the first person! Ok I have been told that my English in these forums is not up to scratch! It was probably because of many things including i was being lazy anyway the point of this topic I have just started editing my video to which I hope with some look should get me a small sponsor as there's some good stuff in it. I was wondering if anyone could watch the video and tell me how I could improve the start colour effects etc the link is below! The video was a cool little introduction to a better creation, I hope.