you seem to ride err pretty heavily... as said before, ride more relaxed, i used to ride like that when i first started riding, and i found that having your arms straight was awkward... maybe try bringing the bike more towards you when on the back wheel? feels so much nicer. i found that most of the video was mostly of you bouncing around and well this made me lose interest quickly. just cut out most of the bouncing and it will look much better, and add more stuff in unless you want a short vid hope you dont take this post in a bad way because it was constructive criticism