very quick to crucify, but not to point in the right direction. you can obviously ride to a 'watchable standard' you should maybe concentrate on having some riding in the video, still shots are and always will be a big no no. people want to see the riding and get it over with. you've obviously discovered the functions of wimdows movie maker which allow title's and gone mad. dont, one title is enough. also the music was a bit much, try something a little.. er.. calmer in the future.