cheesy Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Hey i do songs and poems when i get 5-10mins at night when im bored and i got this poem what do you think off it My PoemA Dream Like thisHere I sit, thinking only of youWondering what is to become of usUnderstanding all you have been throughHoping to slowly gain your trustMy heart aches for you, and also I yearnI want to understand youIn hopes that I will learnYour unique and special qualities amaze meYour smileYour mindYour voice and its beautiful soundYour eyesYour hairYour ability to cheer me upWhen you see that I am downMy feelings for you go beyond that of wordsAnd at first it didn't seem realBut that just taught me a lessonIn doubting what I feelIt seems I dreamed you into lifeAnd the reason for my stareThe bluest skyThe deepest seaDon't even compareyou're so very special in every single wayAnd thoughts of youRun through my headEvery hour of the dayI hope that you will understandJust how I feel about youI want to be your guiding handFor all that you go through.................. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Extreme_biker0 Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Gay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadManMike Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Sorry mate, but OWNED:http://www.netpoets.com/poems/love/1556001.htm"By: Ryan Hull"EDIT: It's even got a small "y" where you chopped out the name Becky and didn't capitalise the Y.Haha! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lawnmowerman Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Hey i do songs and poems when i get 5-10mins at night when im bored and i got this poem what do you think off it My PoemA Dream Like thisHere I sit, thinking only of youWondering what is to become of usUnderstanding all you have been throughHoping to slowly gain your trustMy heart aches for you, and also I yearnI want to understand youIn hopes that I will learnYour unique and special qualities amaze meYour smileYour mindYour voice and its beautiful soundYour eyesYour hairYour ability to cheer me upWhen you see that I am downMy feelings for you go beyond that of wordsAnd at first it didn't seem realBut that just taught me a lessonIn doubting what I feelIt seems I dreamed you into lifeAnd the reason for my stareThe bluest skyThe deepest seaDon't even compareyou're so very special in every single wayAnd thoughts of youRun through my headEvery hour of the dayI hope that you will understandJust how I feel about youI want to be your guiding handFor all that you go through..................Qouted for pwnage! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davetrials Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 you dick, why would u think thats a good idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1a2bcio8 Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 you dick, why would u think thats a good idea.Like a (f**ked off your face) nude late night webcam "chat"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skoze Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Copy and pasting a poem, onto a mainly male forum and passing it off as your own?Smooth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broomer Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 And i suck cock, FOR A LIVING! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davetrials Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Like a (f**ked off your face) nude late night webcam "chat"? hey, thier was no nudity:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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trials_pimp Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Im A singer song wirtter aswell.Been working on this little number for some time:God save our gracious QueenLong live our noble Queen,God save the Queen:Send her victorious,Happy and glorious,Long to reign over us:God save the Queen. O Lord, our God, arise,Scatter thine enemies,And make them fall:Confound their politics,Frustrate their knavish tricks,On thee our hopes we fix:God save us all. Thy choicest gifts in store,On her be pleased to pour;Long may she reign:May she defend our laws,And ever give us causeTo sing with heart and voiceGod save the Queen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christophe' Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 To be fair though, if You lot hadnt have let the secret out the bag, I would have thought it was his own original material. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani. Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Firstly: Haha I love a nice bit of ownage! Secondly: yes, gay. Thirdly: It's a bit cheesy ffs, there are better poems on the net to plagiarise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davetrials Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 To be fair though, if You lot hadnt have let the secret out the bag, I would have thought it was his own original material. are u "angry" at us? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadManMike Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 I love it when a plan comes together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haz Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 There once one was a guy on Trials ForumWho lived 160 miles from ShorhamHe stole a Poemand passed it off as his ow'nHe then got a little bit PWENDCheesey is a theif.He Stole somebodies work.Cheesey is a theif. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bollo you ball-bag Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 lee you ball bag ur not smart enough to write that.bloody puftaall togeter nopuftapuftapuftapuftapuftapuftapuftacan that be a poem it rhymes?tard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UrbanPoet Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 lee you ball bag ur not smart enough to write that.bloody puftaall togeter nopuftapuftapuftapuftapuftapuftapuftacan that be a poem it rhymes?tardI think I prefer the OP's plagiarised poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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